Dead Eyes
I know you linger still,the stench of your passing shadowfollows like a soul out of time. How does it feel,to be trapped within that shrivelling soul,playing the charlatan witch of healing. Like a...
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Deb: I'm sorry you can relate. Thanks for the thoughtful reply.EB: You're very welcome! I would prefer not to have written it... but, I needed to.BC: Hi there! This is at FM, buried in the dungeon...
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Oh, this is so powerful. I can feel the evil oozing out of the subject. Could this be your face to face experience with the devil?Karen
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I sincerely hope you two can find peace and move on. When I read both of your posts I felt sad.Annette
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Karen: Wow! But, no, not the devil.Annette: Thank you for the comment. It is a sad poem, I know.~ Bruce
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Bill,Thank you for your gracious comment! Truth is like a lightning bolt!!!~ Bruce
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I am not sure what to say..Wow!I am sorry for the experience that gave birth to this poem, but what a powerful, wonderful piece..Di.
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Hi Bruce a powerful write sorry you had such inspiration but often beauty springs from hurt
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often beauty springs from hurtSo true, Ivor!Thanks for the thoughtful words.~ Bruce
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Powerful Piece, and sad, so very sad.That is what makes a great dark poem.OM~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's Respite~*~*~
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Yes, it's dark, and sometimes the truth is sad. Nevertheless, truth also has a core of beauty, as well.Thanks, OM!~ Bruce
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This reads fast as the anger rushing it forthIre in flowAmazing work!!!!!She.
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Bruce,You prove a poet's function: to explore the human heart with empathy, and breathe it fresh to the world so that we might all 'feel' it, take in the new perspective, and come to understand the...
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Rich,What you describe sounds like the perfect prescription for living, as well as poetry Thank you!~ Bruce
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Bruce,You said that you did not want to but had to write this. That is the beauty of poetry, it is such a good vehicle for getting out those feelings better not left inside.This is a wonderful piece...
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Irene,Yes, wouldn't want those feelings left inside. Thanks for the kind reply ~ Bruce
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